The given maps illustrate how to enter a city hospital in 2007 and 2010 via the city road including the differences of the external infrastructure of the hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall, both in 2007 and 2010 the hospital has car parking facilities, bus station and a ring road around the hospital. While in 2007 bus station is situated on the the north-east of Hospital road, in 2010 bus station is placed on the west of hospital road and aligned with it.
Firstly, in 2007, both staff and public have the same location to parking their car situated just north of the City Road and east of the Hospital Road. There is connecting road between Parking location and Ring Road, while the bus station is located is on the east side of the Hospital.
On the later case, in 2010, staff and public have separate parking location for car, one is placed in south and another is in east of the city Hospital respectively. Bus station is situated is just opposite of the staff car parking location divided by the Hospital Road and there is also a roundabout just east of the staff parking location. Moreover, it also contains 2 circular road connecting Bus station, City Road, Hospital road and ring road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...hile in 2007 bus station is situated on the the north-east of Hospital road, in 2010 bu...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...hile in 2007 bus station is situated on the the north-east of Hospital road, in 2010 bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67136150235 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47658700946 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.389671361502 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6829900944 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.375 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212574321581 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131392661146 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698701708533 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176172712805 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623058908253 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.