The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The maps show changes in road which access to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. Overall, there are constructed some facilities and redeveloped the road to be more convenient
Looking at the map in 2007, the city hospital was situated in the center and surrounded by Ring Road. Both side of the hospital road was bus stop. In the East, there was a car park for staff and public.
In 2010, there was a dramatic changed. firstly, In the east of city hospital, there was a new constructed of public car park and the carpark in 2007 just now only use for staff. The bus stop was demolished and then built a bus station in the west of the hospital road. The road was enlarged and mde into two roundabout in two side of the road and conect the city road to bus station and hospital road.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 642.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33783783784 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30293426066 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 190.8 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.9374623947 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425354721622 0.215688989381 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19957623564 0.103423049105 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185229363709 0.0843802449381 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323938602439 0.15604864568 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094915155269 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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