These two maps illustrate the way to get into City Hospital in two different years, 2007 and 2010. Overall, it is noticeable that changes involved the construction of two Roundabouts, Bus Station, and Public Car Park.
In 2007, there were several Bus Stops along the Hospital Road. Those Bus Stops were no longer exist in 2010, and as a replacement a new Bus Station was built, on the southwestern side of the map. Moreover, two new Roundabouts were constructed in 2010, where the first Roundabout connected three-way-intersection of Ring Road with Hospital Road, and the second Roundabout connected four-way-intersection of City Road and Hospital Road.
Lastly, changes were made related to Car Park, where in 2007, both Staff and Public used the same Car Park which was located in the southeastern side of the map, and could be accessed via Ring Road. However, in 2010 there was a segregation of Car Park where Staff used the old Car Park and Visitors used the new Car Park which was located in the east side of the map, and could be accessed through Ring Road.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84699453552 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02351262515 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1443841001 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.714285714 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337446430606 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173624320982 0.103423049105 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110608841595 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243510938405 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786514668953 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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