Changes occured in the road entry to a town hospital during 2007 and 2010 is depicted in the given maps.
Overall, it is clearly seen that, there has been significant chaanges in the city and hospital roads. Furthermore, it can be seen that, no changes have been made to the ring road.
In 2007, the hospital and the city roads were connected by a junction. To the south of the hospital there were 3 bus stops. A car park was situated to the east of the hospital road. Also, a ring road was situated around the city hospital.
In 2010, some notable changes took place in the area. The bus stops has been removed and two new roundabouts have been built, connecting the city and hospital roads. To the west of the hospital road, a new bus station had been built, connecting both the roundabouts. On the other hand, the original of the car park is now only used by the staff, instead, a new site has been built to the east of the city hospital. No changes were made to the ring road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 449, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...spital. No changes were made to the ring road.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38043478261 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28857914828 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472826086957 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6470725446 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1666666667 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283046716689 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121716340954 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767104099339 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189048106604 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640170938227 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.