These graphs illustrate two maps near the city hospital in 2007 and 2010. There were several changes happened around the city hospital, which can be obviously noticed in these maps.
In 2007, the city hospital was encircled by Ring Road which was linked by Hospital Road with City Road. And there was a car park, which was available for both staff and public on the east of Hospital Road, surrounded by these three roads. In addition, there were three bus stops on each side of Hospital Road.
When turn to 2010, a new pubic car park was constructed on the east of Ring Road, while the old parking narrowed to specialize in only staff. Obviously, two new roundabouts were set up at the intersection of City Road and Hospital Road as well as Ring Road. Finally, the old bus stations were moved to the west of Hospital Road and connected with these two roundabouts.
Overall. after three-year construction, by and large, there were three main improvements were accomplished there, which contributed to the convenience and efficiency of the city hospital.
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 67
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: PUBIC_X[1]
Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
...pital Road. When turn to 2010, a new pubic car park was constructed on the east of...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...with these two roundabouts. Overall. after three-year construction, by and large, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, well, while, in addition, as well as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63839176604 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538888888889 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6543835827 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22665878258 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116691579405 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832554724814 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140899113315 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529797482479 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.