The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pictures illustration the developments of a city hospital 's road system between 2007 and 2010.
Looking at the map, it is immediately obvious that remarkable changes have taken for more convenient moving and parking. Overall, the new construction has allowed guests to have wider parking and bus station.
In 2007, there was only 6 bus stops on the two sides of hospital road while in 2010, a larger bus station, which was built on the west of hospital road, was connected with two conjunctions of the road by two roundabouts.
The car park for both public and staff, which was placed on the east of hospital road in 2007, was replaced by two separate car parks, the one for staff was on the older place and the one for public was on the east of the hospital in 2010.
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- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 56
- You have bought a mobile phone in a tax-free shop just a few days ago,and it doesn't work properly.Write a letter to the manager to complain about it and ask him to solve the problem. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'pictures'' or 'picture's'?
Suggestion: pictures'; picture's
The pictures illustration the developments of a city...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bus' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'buses', 'busses'.
Suggestion: buses; busses
...us station. In 2007, there was only 6 bus stops on the two sides of hospital road...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of hospital road in 2007, was replaced by two separate car parks, the one for s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 635.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53571428571 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52839991347 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0749561061 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19581757392 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108169135607 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872694444847 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133088098461 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794908138474 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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