The two maps show Tilden Airport and the surrounding area in 1985 and 2015. Write a report for university lecturer summarizing the information shown in the maps.
The two pictures compare the site and the surrounding of Tiden Airport as it was in 1985 with the state of the year 2015.
In 1985, there was a farm outside the airport. By 2015, a business park and houses are constructed on the farmland, and a new runway named Runway Two is also added. Furthermore, the original air support services building was replaced by bus and rail station with new light rail providing an additional way of transport to the city of Tiden.
As the new airport support services building has been built on the site of factories, a new hotel and conference centre have been created to provide further accommodations for travelers. Finally, the original car park and domestic terminal stayed intact while the international park expanded to welcome more international flights and foreigners.
Clearly, the main change in 2015 involved the addition of a new bus and rail station and hotel. The airport then is able to accommodate a larger number of travelers and international flights.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... way of transport to the city of Tiden. As the new airport support services buil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97041420118 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84719315743 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591715976331 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9102422562 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11575662516 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607863767341 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585977060804 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861141898243 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591970328411 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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