The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate how different industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey percentage-wise in the years 2000 and 2016.
Overall, at the beginning of the period construction contributed the least to the economy of turkey, while agriculture was the most significant economic sector. ln comparison, at the end of the period healthcare and education, became the largest economic segment and the lowest contribution was made by finance, business, and other services.
agriculture, which comprised almost a quarter of Turkey's economy in 2000, fell to 14% in 2016. In 2000 economic outputs from government and leisure and hospitality sectors were at 12% and 17%, respectively, both decreased by 3% after a sixty-year period. ln contrast, contribution from the healthcare and education sector remained constant in both years at 19%.
The construction sector accounted for 3% of Turkey's economy in 2000 and experienced a more than threefold increase to one-tenth in 2016. Economic income from trade, utilities and transportation was 14% in 2000 and had a slight growth of 2% in 2016. At the beginning of the period, manufacturing and finance, business and other services made up 8% and 5%
of Turkey's economy respectively, and these figures rose fo 12% and 8 in 2016.
- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restauranta between 2003 and 2013Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make camparisons where relevent. 67
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- The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33658536585 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16748802189 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531707317073 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5751452355 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.555555556 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25629741622 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123130328803 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104044205493 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173746911114 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112227199053 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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