The wealth of a nation is said to depend on the health of its citizens Yet in the modern knowledge based economies of the world education is more and more being seen as the main force in the development of all countries Do you share this view Give reasons

A country can only prosper if all its citizens are healthy, making it ideal for progress. Education is another important aspect for a country to prosper. While one needs to have a strong health condition, the right to education is also equal for him to become one of a kind in today's competitive world.

Health is a very important factor for a nation to develop. Nowadays, large scale and deadly diseases are made easy to deal with, thanks to the modern technology. But the importance of good health once ignored or avoided can lead to the crumbling of a nation in the fields of development and prosperity. The nation lags behind, just due the minor ignorance of good health. Most of the leading countries in such fields are in such a position due to following aspects of good health such as providing proper and clean water supply, adequate food, sanitation and healthcare facilities to its general public.

Education is also required by a nation for substantial progress. A nation that provides the right to education provides its citizens with one of the major needs for the country to prosper. Education is such a factor of our daily lives that makes them vital. Without proper education, man is a cipher. Nothing can affect the developmental process of a country more than its citizens living devoid of education. Education is what makes a country lead or lag.

We all know the importance of good health and quality education. The one main conclusion we can come to is that not only education, but proper health should also be looked after in a nation for progress that leads to prosperity.

Votes
Average: 9.2 (10 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 589, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...tation and healthcare facilities to its general public. Education is also required by a nat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 3.97073170732 428% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 965.302439024 138% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83695652174 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66119427071 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503623188406 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8572571824 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4375 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156376109661 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578661102309 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280981606829 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993510998986 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110847777363 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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