In this day and age, going along with the development of transportation, travelling has been becoming a more and more popular activity. There are some advantages of travelling we will mention in this essay which are to enhance the knowledge and to achieve piece of mind.
First of all, travellers can enhance their knowledge effectively. They have chances to discover the place where they go to, of course, but it can also allow them to learn about a different civilization, stories throughout the history and even its contribution to the world. In addition, it provides a hand-on educational experience that they cannot be replicated in books or classrooms. As a result, travellers are able to take more experience and widen the knowledge on their own.
Secondly, people can achieve piece of mind throughout travelling. Nowadays, daily routines involve many people navigating in chase of their busy schedules. Therefore, they easily get stuck in stress and burnout which make them feel dissatisfied with their jobs. Thus, many people consider travelling as a cure. By travelling, thay can take a step back and think about things and people they miss. Subsequently, travellers get a better perspective on their own life. Moreover, travelling may let them live life for its own sake.
In short, according to the aforementioned advantages of travelling, people can surely take travelling without thinking. Therfore, I strongly agree that trevelling is a beneficial activity for all of us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in short, of course, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25941422594 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02122183502 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 106.607317073 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615062761506 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9023849597 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902112670986 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352854530322 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360636238676 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629053639661 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199052144287 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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