What are the things you want to change at the your university which would help its education function better

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What are the things you want to change at the your university which would help its education function better

The university education is viewed as an essential part in every student’s life, and without it there can be no improvement. Students today attempt to look for the best universities, so they can secure a better future and even develop further. When it comes to Moroccan universities, there are some policies that are needed to be changed such as the limited use of technology in classrooms and the limited freedom of expression.
To begin with, the limited use of technology in classrooms can hinder students’ improvement. Many students nowadays struggle to keep up with their classmates’ pace simply because they are slow learners. Taking a certain course in a traditional way forces students to follow a certain pace that they may not be able to keep up with. Therefore, giving students the chance to use technology in class will not only help them to improve, but it will also make sure that they take part.
Not only the limited use of technology hinder students’ improvement, but it also makes it harder for teachers to send their knowledge. Instead of using the limitless resources on the internet, teachers are forced to use the traditional ways to explain their lessons simply because they are not allowed to use technology in class too.
Another policy that should be changed to help Moroccan universities function better is by removing the limited freedom of expression. Students now are unable to express their ideas because their scared to do so. When a student is not allowed to express himself, not only he will remain silent, but he won’t improve too.
In short, when it comes to Moroccan universities, there are some policies that should be changed to make its education better such as the limited use of both technology in classes and the freedom of expression.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, in short, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 965.302439024 156% => OK
No of words: 300.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03333333333 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91890390387 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 283.868780488 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7757318547 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0843079719604 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386318851102 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612911877516 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638635601911 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496917803032 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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