Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part time job to support his studies. In your letter
- Describe the job you found for him/her
- Explain why this job is good for him/her
- Say what he/she needs to do to get the job
Dear Rahul,
How are you? Hope you are doing well. Last time you had discussed with me that you are looking for a part time job that gives you an option to earn something while studying. Good news is that I am able to find a good opportunity for you. This is the reason I am writing to you now.
Just for your information, one of the best software companies is hiring part time java programmers. I think the job is suitable for you because of many reasons. Firstly, you can work on the live project of your choice in this company that is being required in your final semester. Secondly, undoubtedly, you would have an experience to work in the multinational company and this experience really gives you an upper hand to find a job in the near future. Finally, company had agreed to provide all sorts of help in your academic studies. For example; they would provide a laptop to you that would be helpful in your studies.
However, there are few pre-requisite to join this offer. First and foremost is to give 2 suitable references of people who are staying in this area from last 10 years. Moreover, you need to give them a consent letter stating that you would stay in the organization for at-least one year.
I hope this job is suitable for you. I am looking forward to hearing soon from you.
Best Regards
John
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Good news is that
The good news is that
Finally, company had agreed to provide all sorts of help
Finally, the company had agreed to provide all sorts of help
Sentence: However, there are few pre-requisite to join this offer.
Error: pre-requisite Suggestion: prerequisite
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 18 10
No. of Words: 241 200
No. of Characters: 1043 1000
No. of Different Words: 134 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.94 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.328 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.375 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 59 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.389 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.945 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.338 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.606 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.232 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4