Write a letter to a local newspaper and describe a restaurant where you and your family have had a delicious meal recently. Please say
- What restaurant and where is it?
- What food do they serve?
- Would you recommend it to others? Why?
Dear Sir,
As yesterday was my birthday, I and some of my friends had visited one of the eminent restaurants in our area to celebrate my birthday party. The name of the restaurant is Bombay Dreams and it is located in Park Avenue Road, North point, Hong Kong. Before visiting this restaurant, I have been to many of the restaurants; however, I never received the hospitality, in terms of the services, which I had received in this restaurant.
The specialties of this restaurant, in terms of the cuisines are extraordinary. This restaurant offers all varieties of Indian food;especially vegetarian, Chinese, Vietnamese and Thai. Moreover, basic services of the restaurant are far better than the other restaurants. To serve the customers better; it is being ensured by the hotel owner that one waiter is serving only one table at a time. We are quite amazed to see that our complete order was served on our table within 15 minutes,even though restaurant is fully booked.
When we finished the lunch, restaurant waiter offered us a complimentary sweet dish. In addition, as the hotel is totally new, while preparing the bill, manager had completely waive off the extra 10% service tax from the total amount that is really good deal in terms of the cost. The reasons, why I am writing to your local newspaper is to recommend Bombay Dreams to all the people staying in our area and I must say, to celebrate any special occasion, one must visit this restaurant.
Yours faithfully
Michael
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