Write a paragraph about environmental pollution problems and solutions to them
For the being time, people have been facing to environment pollution. The two biggest problem are air and water pollution for the following reasons:
The first, gas emmisions from factories and exhaust fumes vehicles lead to air pollution. There are industrializes that everyone need to build business unit in order to sastify their life. they cut down many trees to have enough wide developing engineers. Therefore; people are living surrounded CO2. It is the reason why someone have bad temperatures.
The second , people suffer from pollutions as the human population increase. However; their awareness is too bad to protect the environment from keeping on polluting. they litter everywhere such as: in the ocean, in the lake, in the roadside..., which go on increasing pollutants pumped into the atmosphere.
And so, it's necessary for everybody to save the nature from rising pollution. The first method, we have to raise children's alertness, even as a kid. Because the futire of the environment depends on the younger generations. Secondly, everyone must obey 3RS compaign: reduce, reuse, recycle, which help to dump less pollutants into the air. Finally, we should encourage to use public transport and take fewer flights abroad so as to decrease emmision garbage.
In short, people have been devasting the environment lead to many serious pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
For the being time, people have been fac...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r pollution for the following reasons: The first, gas emmisions from factories ...
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Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ss unit in order to sastify their life. they cut down many trees to have enough wide...
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Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... have enough wide developing engineers. Therefore; people are living surrounded CO2. It i...
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Line 2, column 333, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...unded CO2. It is the reason why someone have bad temperatures. The second , peop...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on why someone have bad temperatures. The second , people suffer from pollutio...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ne have bad temperatures. The second , people suffer from pollutions as the hu...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...tions as the human population increase. However; their awareness is too bad to protect ...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... environment from keeping on polluting. they litter everywhere such as: in the ocean...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ollutants pumped into the atmosphere. And so, its necessary for everybody to s...
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Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ise childrens alertness, even as a kid. Because the futire of the environment depends o...
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Line 4, column 312, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun pollutants is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...uce, reuse, recycle, which help to dump less pollutants into the air. Finally, we sh...
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Line 4, column 425, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...transport and take fewer flights abroad so as to decrease emmision garbage. In short...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d so as to decrease emmision garbage. In short, people have been devasting the...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun pollution seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much serious pollution', 'a good deal of serious pollution'.
Suggestion: much serious pollution; a good deal of serious pollution
... been devasting the environment lead to many serious pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32558139535 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8283930241 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66511627907 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9379214078 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0583224594689 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0164193947696 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028304606813 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0348168128399 0.15604864568 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349311459331 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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