Write a report on the data provided which compares correlation between attained education, weekly income and unemployment rate in the USA.
The two bar charts measured an average weekly income by eight different categories of people ranked by education degree and the number of unemployment in that categories of people in the USA in 2015. Overall, citizens who had at very least bachelor degree earned noticeably more money and had lower percentage of unemployment than people who did not have higher education.
First, people with professional degree had the highest salary even more than PhD's, at $1730 and $1623 respectively. Also, the fewer professionals did not have job, at 1.5 per cent.
Second, Americans without high education did not get more than $800 of income. From those categories, highest salary was earned people with associate's degree where was the lowest salary was payed to people who did not graduated from school, at $798 and $493 respectively. Moreover, citizens without a high school diploma had the highest proportion of unemployment within 8 per cent which was 5 times more than professionals had.
In conclusion, medium salary was $860 per week which is between bachelors and associates salaries and an average unemployment was 4.3 per cent.
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- Write a report on the data provided which compares correlation between attained education, weekly income and unemployment rate in the USA. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...o, the fewer professionals did not have job, at 1.5 per cent. Second, Americans ...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
...than 00 of income. From those categories, highest salary was earned people with associate...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...average unemployment was 4.3 per cent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13661202186 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84712563809 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562841530055 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1140570849 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924338753063 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434419197707 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488097872089 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653776795427 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522161757162 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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