The provided line graphs elucidate the female member of parliament in four European country: Germany, France,Belgium and UK. They explain about rise in the participation of women member in parliament from year 2000 to 2012.
UK has largest female member in the parliament and there is gradual rise from year 2000 to 2004 (27 to 39 approximately). Whereas, there is significant hike in female parliamentary member in France. It has raised significantly from 2000 to 2008 and has steady rise from 2008 to 2014. With the significant rise France still has lowest parliamentary women member.
It is apparent that UK has highest and France has lowest female parliamentary member. However, Germany can be ranked on second position for having second largest female in parliament with steady rise. Belgium has third largest female members in parliament and the rise in member is gradual. Whereas, Italy has most consistent rise in female member from 2000 to 20012 (20 to 25) and has third largest women member in parliament.
In summary, four of the European country; Germany, France,Belgium and UK have increasing percentage of female parliamentary member. Nation like UK and France have highest and lowest female member respectively. Italy and Belgium are has consistent and steady rise in female member respectively. As a whole, the line graphs elucidate rise in female parliamentary member and make clear about increasing percentage of female in power which is exceptionally good for women empowerment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...centage of female in the parliament. It has largest women member in the parliament. There i...
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...ar 2000 to 2004 27 to 39 approximately. Whereas, there is significant hike in female pa...
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...cant hike in female parliamentary member the in France. It has raised significant...
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... With the significant rise France still has lowest parliamentary woman member. It is ap...
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...apparent that UK has highest and France has lowest female parliamentary member. However, G...
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...dual. Whereas, Italy has most consistent rise in female member from 2000 to 20012...
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...nd France have highest and lowest female member respectively. Italy and Belgium a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, still, third, whereas, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31764705882 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04117583848 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.38431372549 0.547539520022 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3554477639 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309193380614 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142624389349 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531855270026 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232528523428 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229192219306 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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