The process flow illustrates the production of silk cloth with the help of the life cycle of silkworm and also defines each stage of the method for using commercial production.
Overall, life cycle beginning from the eggs of the silkworm and ending with the period of 16 days to produce Moth. Where the production stages start by selecting the cocoon and ending with weave or dye.
The life cycle of the silkworm, initially starts by producing eggs, then growing mulberry leaf and formed silkworm after 10 days afterwards it will be taken 4-6 weeks silk thread. In the subsequent stage, cocoon is formed within 3-8 days and the long period around 16 days required to form moth finally life cycle is completed of the silkworm.
Later on, coming to the production method of silk thread by following the below steps, first we select the cocoon and then boil in a water and try to unwind to 300-900 meter and last not the least twisting a long multiple threads and then dying or finally starts weaving and then done dying process.
- The graphs below show three exports from South East Asia and the four sources of revenue for 1970 and 1995 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below 67
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Writing Task 1 at least 150 words The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999 summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.288349451 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8721832221 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0314078191526 0.215688989381 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0184479695663 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268218389744 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0206892624067 0.15604864568 13% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208112989744 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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