the chart illustrates the gram number consume of three kind of different foods in a European country from 1976 to 2006
It is clear from the chart that , the gram Number of pasta had a increased steadily while the amount of gram in rice and potatoes have a change were not certain
In 1976 , the gram number of potatoes reach the peak at about 410 , while the amount in gram
of rice was the secondly point at around 310 and the number of gram in pasta reach the bottom at about 250
It can see that , the potatoes and rice haven't consumption of certain in gram from about 1976 to 1988 ; moreover , the consumption of potatoes between 1988 and 2006 witness and downward trend and the number in gram of rice grow . Meanwhile , In pasta had a irregulare consumption form 1976 to 1986 and rised consumption between 1986 and 1996 ; however, the amount in gram of rice consumption was no chance from 1996 to 2006 . Specially , the number of gram in pasta and potatoes were equal in 1986
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, secondly, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47752808989 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35167180794 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415730337079 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 22.4926829268 262% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 278.36786213 43.030603864 647% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 265.666666667 112.824112599 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.3333333333 22.9334400587 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.3333333333 5.23603664747 350% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199140513657 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125636523393 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526148701367 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125680687031 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221469468896 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.3 13.2329268293 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.3012195122 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 11.4329268293 455% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.9970731707 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.