WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows social and economic indicators for four
countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics.
Describe the information shown below in your own words. What
implications do the indicators have for the countries?
Indicators Canada Japan Peru Zaire
Annual income per person (in $US) 11100 15760 160 130
Life expectancy at birth 76 78 51 47
Daily calorie supply per person 3326 2846 1927 1749
Adult literacy rate (%) 99 99 68 3
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The given table enumerates the USA’s data in terms of the social and economic aspects for Canada, Japan, Peru and Zaire in year 1994.
As is observed, Canada and Japan far outweighed Peru and Zaire in respect of their residents social and economic conditions.
Regarding the economic standard, Japan accounted for the highest annual earning indicator at approximately 16 thousand, accompanied by Canada with over 4500 USD less. In contrast, the annual income of a citizen in Peru and Zaire were less than 200 USD (160 and 130 correspondingly) and this figures were fewer approximately 100 times than that of Japan and Peru.
In aspect of social conditions, life expectancy was highest in Japan, 78 years which was marginally higher than that of Canadians by 2 years but substantially higher than that of Peru and Zaire by 27 and 31 years respectively. Only in the adult literacy rate, were the data of Canada and Japan equal at 99% which was half time higher than that of Peru. In contrast, two-thirds adults in Zaire were illiterate. Finally, the daily calorie supply per head in Canada was highest at over 3300 whilst that in Japan was slightly lower by 3 kilocalories. The people in Peru and Zaire, however consumed less than 2 kilocalories daily.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, regarding, so, third, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93867924528 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76852236602 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533018867925 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7169767562 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.052566067028 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276071454474 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365621025012 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532782689717 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381285415067 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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