WT1: tells your friend about your good news. Wt is it? Why does it effect your life? Invite him/her over for celebration.
Dear Vic,
How are you? I am writing this letter to tell you that I have got 7 each in IELTS. As you might know, I was working so hard from last 2 months to obtain this mark and now I have my IELTS result in my hand with seven each.
This is big milestone of my life that I have completed. Now, I can apply to Australian immigration for permanent residency. Last time, I have told you that my brothers and mom are living in Australia. I have no on in my back home country to go to and this was the only requirement that I had to achieve.
After residency, I can stay here for my whole life. Australia is a beautiful country and I can see a better life over here. I will stay with my family. And I am also graduating this year from Griffith University and I could work full time in my further career. We are also going to buy a new house so this will be a best life to live here after so many sufferings that we have seen.
Anyways, on next Sunday, I am throwing a party and I have invited all of my friends in the Garden city at 7:00 pm. I would be so pleased if you could find a time to come and enjoy with us. Don’t forget to write me back. See you soon
With love
Pip
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This is big milestone of my life
This is a big milestone of my life
Sentence: We are also going to buy a new house so this will be a best life to live here after so many sufferings that we have seen.
The token a is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to a and best
I have invited all of my friends in the Garden city at 7:00 pm.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.444 21.0
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.944 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.727 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 27 50
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Sentence Length SD: 8.604 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.607 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.188 0.07
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