Dear Sir
I am writing this letter to complain about unsatisfactory experience we had at your restaurant last week. We often visit this place for get together because we like the environment and food.
Last week, We all friends decided to start with starter. We ordered a vegetable sizzler. It is very sad to say that it was not tasty at all. Vegetables were not cooked properly even it was smelling. Then, I requested waiter to take dish back and served us with new one but he refused to take back and started arguing with us on its taste and fresh. His behaviour was aggressive and intolerant which is completely unappreciable. The worst thing is he forced us to pay for the dish which we had not eaten.
I would like to suggest please check the food before serving to customer. You should consider hygiene and soft communication on your priority. We also want apology letter from waiter. Please consider such points so that we continue our visit at this restaurant.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours Faithfully
Gurjeet kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'We' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'friend'
Suggestion: friend
...ironment and food. Last week, We all friends decided to start with starter. We order...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...tables were not cooked properly even it was smelling. Then, I requested waiter to take dish ...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est please check the food before serving to customer. You should consider hygiene...
^^
Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to customer. You should consider hygiene and soft communication on your priority...
^^
Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...consider hygiene and soft communication on your priority. We also want apology l...
^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... at this restaurant. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours Faithfully Gurjeet ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, then, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83425414365 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62444314867 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67955801105 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4788112157 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3333333333 112.824112599 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0666666667 22.9334400587 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141292984668 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490645788802 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451853109819 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931869016764 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244738582064 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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