Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to inquire about the electronic equipments I am interested to buy from your shop.
I am having trouble with buying new equipments for my house. Then, one of my friend recommended your name to me. Thus, I decided to buy from your shop. I wanted to buy vacuum cleaner, refrigerator, automatic washing machine and microwave. Please notify me whether you have all the apllaince. furthermore, I also wondered if you could help me in buying those things which are not available there.
Moreover, I would also like to know the price of them. It will be really appreciated if you provide me some discount as I am purchasing many items from you.
As I told you earlier about my moving in next month so, I will be very grateful to your cooperation if you hold this items for the specified time period or any other time period whichever is more convenient to you.
Looking forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully
Gurjeet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and microwave. Please notify me whether you have all the apllaince. furthermore,...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...me whether you have all the apllaince. furthermore, I also wondered if you could help me i...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rateful to your cooperation if you hold this items for the specified time period or ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Looking forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully Gurjeet
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you Yours faithfully Gurjeet
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Suggestion:
...rom you Yours faithfully Gurjeet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81656804734 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67302412001 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656804733728 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5151128633 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229007451847 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842569719908 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045815368597 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126595725675 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516878330408 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.