Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about some issues that I have been experiencing from past couple of weeks while working as a part-time trainer with Technogems Ltd.
Being a recent computer technology graduate, I was actively seeking a challenging position as a corporate trainer for an IT company with a good reputation in offering industry specific training solutions. As a result, I had applied in various organizations and luckily got a job as a corporate trainer in your esteemed company.
Although I am quite satisfied with my job because there are many opportunities to learn about latest technologies, however from past few months, I am not getting paid for my work at all. In addition to this, my manager expects me to work for extra hours, in violation with the terms of my employment contract.
I would appreciate if you could discuss these issues with the concerned authorities, so that my grievances would be addressed, as I am feeling quite disturbed and demotivated, resulting in loss of my productivity at work.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sameer Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...am, I am writing to inform you about some of the problems that I have been experiencing ...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...ing position as a corporate trainer for an IT company with a good reputation in offer...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...sition as a corporate trainer for an IT company with a good reputation in offering indu...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
...e there are many opportunities to learn about latest technologies, however from past few mon...
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Line 14, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon. Yours faithfully, Sameer Kumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03684210526 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03680561868 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668421052632 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4094976959 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.625 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224889435739 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884281351191 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401823292087 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111908623627 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362510885592 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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