I am writing to apply for the memory course which I have seen in your website.
I am 34 years old and working as an executor engineer. I used to memorize whole of details related to my projects. But I have recently found I can not remind extra details and slip some issues from my mind. Since powerful memory is crucial in my position as well as related experiences and academic education, I have tried to boost it by visualizing methods, however it doesn't work for me. I would like to know what strategies and ways you use to bear something in mind. Is it possible to explain some specialized and unique aspects of your course? And also how much does it cost?
As an employer, I am free in the weekends so I hope you offer me suit and flexible time.
I am looking forward to hearing you.
Sincerely,
Atrisa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 667.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41721854305 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51498731153 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662251655629 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.808694576 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.1 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169745607896 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570257502496 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070430550544 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124289845063 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067901511554 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.