You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart indicates the proportion of males and females in working in Australia, Japan, and Ireland in 2005 and 2015. In general, the figure for working men increased, with the percentage of women showing the most remarkable growth.
Looking at the first graph it can be clearly seen that over 70% of men was working in Japan, comparing to the proportion of men in Australia and Ireland that reached about 62% and 68% respectively. Moreover, the percentage of men working in Ireland was higher than that of men in Australia that was accounted for below 70%. In addition, approximately 30% of employed women in Japan reached the lowest, while just over 40% of working women rate in Ireland.
Moving to the second graph, as can be seen, there was a significant rise in the proportion of employees in those three countries. About 36% of women was working in Japan that comparing to under 60% and 50% respectively in women rate in Australia and Ireland. Male employees in Japan marked the best figure which was accounted for nearly 80%. The percentage of men in 2015 rose to 70% in both Australia and Ireland.
To summarize, both years 2005 and 2015 had the volatile datas, including the figure for employed men and women in Australia, Japan, and Ireland. The percentage of men was working in three countries in 2015 had the biggest increase.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-06-17 | Kelly33 | 67 | view |
| 2022-09-15 | Nguyễn Ninh | 56 | view |
| 2021-11-10 | phg_phg | 67 | view |
| 2021-11-04 | viviene | 69 | view |
| 2021-10-16 | Muhammad Hassam Saeed | 56 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, second, while, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81034482759 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64766066849 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439655172414 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6547175537 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.454545455 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177665760157 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901042831386 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482017269115 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140834175968 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441910308591 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.