You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Write at least 150 words.
The charts below compare the rates of three types of nutrients in typical meals and how unhealthy it is if eaten foo much.
Breakfast and lunch tend to remain steady, whereas dinner and snacks have a gradual volatility in the percentage. Both meals are more fluctuant on the average percentage of nutrients.
Both breakfast and snacks contain sodium equally while lunch and dinner contains twice much as lunch. Sodium reaches at peak at dinner, at 45%. In comparison to it, saturated salt has an upward trend in every meals, except dinner. However, dinner accounts for far more of saturated salt, remains the highest point in both nutrients. On the other hand, added sugar has a dramatic growth in snacks, three times more than sodium. It hits the highest point with 42% of total. In contrast, breakfast, lunch, and dinner are nearly the same, rise by 3% to 4%. Although the major trend in most meals grow up slightly in every nutrients, added sugar experienced an enormous increase in snacks. Sodium also has the same growth in dinner. In general, all nutrients are contained in each meal, esspecially dinner and snacks account for far more of the total sodium and added sugar.
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| 2024-03-28 | minhnhat2002 | 11 | view |
| 2024-03-28 | minhnhat2002 | 78 | view |
| 2023-12-06 | Tosyne | 67 | view |
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| 2023-11-10 | Mayuresh0809 | 61 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('gradually') instead an adjective, or a noun ('volatility') instead of another adjective.
... steady, whereas dinner and snacks have a gradually volatility in the percentage. Both meals are more ...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sodium
...nd dinner contains twice much as lunch. sodium reaches at peak at dinner, at 45%. In c...
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Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...n snacks, three times more than sodium. it hits the highest point with 42% of tota...
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Line 3, column 685, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sodium
...rienced an enormous increase in snacks. sodium also has the same growth in dinner. In ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, whereas, while, in contrast, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.905 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40403306966 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0951720082 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998786152023 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465164379177 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894994513934 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139575997347 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130709339158 0.0819641961636 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.