You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98.
The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
You should write at least 150 words.
The table describes how many people did a journey in the years between 1994 and 1998 and it classifies the data reported by sorting the different trips according to the purposes of the travellers. The bar chart below displays the how the choices of destinations have changed during the same time range.
Overall, the number of individuals who went outside the UK have been growing over the 5-year period and Western Europe has always been the favourite destination, with a significant advantage over North America and Other Areas.
Looking at the first figures, it is noticeable that the only decrease the total had throughout the years was experienced between 1994 and 1995, when the number of abroad permanences due to holidays decreased by 400 units. However, after this little drop, the toll have begun to rise again steadly, to rich a peak in 1998 with 28,828 travels. Holiday, business and visits to friend and relatives categories experienced an increase, whereas the number travel for other reasons remained almost stable at quota 985.
Moving to the second graph, it is relevant to notice that the trend related to travel to Western Europe followed the trend of total holiday, with a low point in 1995 followed by a gradual rise lasted until 1998. Travels to North America and Other Areas are minor and count always over 14,000 passenger less than European trips.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...ravellers. The bar chart below displays the how the choices of destinations have change...
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'count'.
Suggestion: always count
...h America and Other Areas are minor and count always over 14,000 passenger less than Europea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00869565217 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45796417828 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3623004087 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102333634768 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420760549872 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0176819185017 0.0843802449381 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548773156053 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238280553327 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.