The given line graph illustrates how much money earned by the four different food outlets in year 2010 for specific metropolitan. Units are measured in thousand dollars.
In initial half decade, rapid fluctuatition was noticed in the Spicy fortune in between nearly 170 thousand dollars to 120 dollars and Delicacy fluctuated from 40 thousand to 20 thousand dollar. While, steady increase and decrease was there in Evening paradise and Grand Fiesta respectively with about 0.50 lakh and 0.1 million at commemnce. This both resraurants surpasses each other in late May(80000 dollars) and after july (approx 90000 dollars).
After that, all the restaurant earned a good amount with dramatic grouth except Spicy Fortune was fell down from 140000 dollar in october to nearly 50000 dollar in December.
Overall, Delicacy, Evening paradise and Grand Fiesta created an noticable upward trend in the earning; while, a clear dawnfall was observed in case of Spicy Fortune. Another interesting point is that at the end, Evening paradise is the most famous place to eat with a paramount position on the graph at the end of mentioned timeline whereas, the least preferred one is the Spicy Fortune although popular at beginning. Approximate 190 thousand dollars is the highest amount in the chart from given time period which was taken by the Evening paradise restaurant in final month.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...fic metropolitan. Units are measured in thousand dollars. In initial half decade, rapid...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...Spicy Fortune was fell down from 140000 dollar in october to nearly 50000 dollar in De...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...40000 dollar in october to nearly 50000 dollar in December. Overall, Delicacy, ...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ber to nearly 50000 dollar in December. Overall, Delicacy, Evening paradise and ...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ening paradise and Grand Fiesta created an noticable upward trend in the earning; ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng paradise restaurant in final month.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23981900452 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55207631303 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633484162896 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6046449787 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0922840971643 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373881606074 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352824984814 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563719453583 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247501206192 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.