Dear Romik,
It was a perfect week when we spent our quality time together just couple of days ago. I am really thankful to you as you made my trip memorable. You might have found my wallet somewhere from your home and that is the reason I am writing this letter to you.
I was totally forgot to take my wallet back after comming out from washroom. I put it on top of drawer while I was taking bath. There is nothing very important inside this wallet but it is very special to me because I received it from my parents on my last birthday. I will not only be only greatful, but also very fotunate if I get it back. It was brown colour with golden chain on side and made from lather.
One of my friends is living at walking distance from your house and he is visiting me next month. I am wondering if you can send it back to me with him. Let me know if you can not do it, I will give you my address so you can send it through courier. I will book shipment upfront and share you shipping once I get your confirmation.
Yours lovingly,
Divyesh
Yours faithfully
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Romik, It was a perfect week when we spent our ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...ng this letter to you. I was totally forgot to take my wallet back after comming ou...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20289855072 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23545733155 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613526570048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9945374325 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.9230769231 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370419746318 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129393347598 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120970330705 0.0603063233224 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250208535511 0.12726935374 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161027778212 0.0580467560999 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Romik, It was a perfect week when we spent our ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...ng this letter to you. I was totally forgot to take my wallet back after comming ou...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20289855072 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23545733155 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613526570048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9945374325 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.9230769231 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370419746318 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129393347598 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120970330705 0.0603063233224 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250208535511 0.12726935374 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161027778212 0.0580467560999 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.