You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Given is a bar chart comparing the amount of different types of products which Scotland exported to the remainder of the UK and those to the rest of the world in 2014.
Overall, it is apparent from the chart that Scotland was less likely to have goods exported to the UK than other counterparts of the world, except for electrical and instrument engineering. The difference in business services, finance, hotel and restaurant services was the most significant.
According to the information, in 2014, in terms of products traded to the UK, the majority, 5 billion euros, was products in chemical and mineral, followed was food and drink manufacture and electrical and instrument engineering, namely 4.4 and 4 billion respectively. Agriculture, forestry and fishing and mining were the least popular products exported. In contrast, business services, finance, hotel and restaurant services accounted for the largest products traded to the rest of the world, being 13.8 billion euros and the minority 2.3 billion was in electrical and instrument engineering.
It is evident that Scotland had a tendency to export more to other counterparts of the world than to the rest of England, and by far the most considerable gap between them was noticed in business services, finance, hotel and restaurant services, with the latter outnumbered the former nearly 7:1. Export in regard to electrical and instrument engineering, however, showed a converse trend with the amount of goods which were traded to the rest of the UK approximately doubled those to the rest of the globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, except for, in contrast, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20158102767 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96554392656 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458498023715 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9445092556 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.5 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.625 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17160946454 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867011135305 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751844997918 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135315559783 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664769565724 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.2329268293 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.