You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The given two bar charts illustrate the information about car and bicycle which is used by people for going to work as well as it represents the several kind of reasons of using these two source of travelling .
It is crystal clear that the much more priority is given to ride bicycle rather than car by similarly 30% people for health fitness and less pollution . However, the given proportion of people is approximately constant for having a equally interest to use a bicycle for going to work due to less parking hindrances as well as without any kind of cost.
In the further scrutinizing , it can be clearly notified that the car is used by 40% people for being a comfortable as compared with cycle .In fact, due to some advantages like ; faster than cycle and no need to carry things people give much more preference to car.
Overall, it indicates that both car and cycle have their own importance in the life of people for going to work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The given two bar charts illustrate the info...
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Suggestion: several kinds
...ng to work as well as it represents the several kind of reasons of using these two source of...
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... of using these two source of travelling . ...
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... using these two source of travelling . It is crystal clear that the much more p...
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... rather than car by similarly 30% people for health fitness and less pollution . ...
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...e for health fitness and less pollution . However, the given proportion of people...
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...le is approximately constant for having a equally interest to use a bicycle for ...
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Message: You used an adverb ('equally') instead an adjective, or a noun ('interest') instead of another adjective.
...le is approximately constant for having a equally interest to use a bicycle for going to work due...
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...y constant for having a equally interest to use a bicycle for going to work due t...
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... as well as without any kind of cost. In the further scrutinizing , it can be ...
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Suggestion: ,
... In the further scrutinizing , it can be clearly notified that the car...
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...ing a comfortable as compared with cycle .In fact, due to some advantages like ; ...
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...g a comfortable as compared with cycle .In fact, due to some advantages like ; fa...
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...h cycle .In fact, due to some advantages like ; faster than cycle and no need t...
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...ome advantages like ; faster than cycle and no need to carry things people give...
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...dvantages like ; faster than cycle and no need to carry things people give much...
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...eople give much more preference to car. Overall, it indicates that both car and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, well, in fact, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60946745562 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52699680525 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591715976331 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.007923936 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.8 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 5.23603664747 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140666563341 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850100718338 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441762919435 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953410519105 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449490749212 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.