You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee andbananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and m

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and
bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
*Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been
paid an officially agreed fair price.
You should write at least 150 words.

Submitted by LY on Mon, 03/18/2019 - 12:54

The first table illustrates a survey about the statistic of sale of coffee between the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden in the years 1999 and 2004, while the second table shows an investigation about banana selling.

Overall, those European countries imported more coffee in 2004 than they did in 1999, as was the case in consuming bananas except Sweden.

In the survey, Switzerland spent nearly 3ME on coffee, so it was clearly the maximum consumption on import those, and then this figure increased dramatically by triple in the 2004. However, although the UK spent only half of money of Switzerland on coffee in 1999, this number grew sharply to 20ME by the end of 2004, coming the first place. In addition, the rest countries kept the relatively low level on importing coffee in 1999, despite such countries as Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden experienced a brief increase in 2004.

Switzerland spent more their budget(about 15ME) on bananas than other countries in 1999, as was the case, spending 47ME, in the year 2004. Additionally, the UK spent their money on bananas increasing from 1ME in 1999 to 5.5 in 2004, while Belgium also experienced a growth on consumption from 0.6 to 4 during the whole period of the survey. By contrast, Sweden and Denmark decreased their expense on banana respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, second, so, then, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04566210046 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73484344226 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557077625571 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0522937833 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.125 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149147727021 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708750331355 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523623358127 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107604424398 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497268806714 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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