You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like it to buy from you. (Write 150 words).
Dear Samantha,
Hope you are doing well.
It has been a while since our last conversation.
I have written this letter to inform you that my family is migrating to New Zealand and will be flying by end of this month. Given this, we would need to sell some bulky items like television because we will not be able to bring it over.(61)
I am just thinking if you can consider buying it. The television is a 40 inch flat screen TV having the Sony Bravia brand. It has Dolby speaker which gives it a great sound. There's also a USB portal where you can plug and watch movies. (105)
I believe it is a good buy that is why I thought of offering you first. May I invite you to visit our place at the same time check the Television until 20th of this month if you are available. I will offer it to others by 21st if you are not interested. This time should be enough for others to check on it the said unit.
Thank you in advance and looking forward in hearing from you soon.(34)
Lovelots,
Maricel
by end of this month
by the end of this month
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