Dear John,
Hope my letter will find you in the warmth of life and wealth. I am writing this letter to ask you a favour of finding me a place to live in, near you at Vasant Vihar, New Delhi.
Let me tell you in details. As you know, I was trying to shift to Delhi for so long now. Fortunately, yesterday I got a job offer from a university there, but, they are asking me to join on 1st of November only. Hence, finding accommodation, packing my stuff and shifting in such small notice is being difficult for me, so, I thought of you.
I don’t have anything in particular but just should have a decent kitchen where I can make myself a meal. A 1 bedroom flat is more than enough. Though, the university is providing me with a dormitory but I prefer autonomy. So, a furnished flat in any fascinating society in my range will be the best choice.
I anterior present my apologies for the inconvenience my aforementioned request bring to you and thank you for your all time support. You are always a great help.
Thanks once again. Awaiting for your reply.
Love,
Neha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, Hope my letter will find you in the warm...
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Line 11, column 20, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...ays a great help. Thanks once again. Awaiting for your reply. Love, Neha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, in particular, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46231155779 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62454956087 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678391959799 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5757364391 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4285714286 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33872428497 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102313027182 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930219720727 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175246381343 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105329180946 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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