Dear John,
Hope my letter will find you in the warmth of life and health. I am writing this letter as a response to your invitation to join your “Go Abroad” travel company.
First of all I would like to thank you for considering me for the post “area manager”. It really means a lot to me. Apparently, this company, along with arranging tours and trips, is also into arranging academic tours. I had searched about it lately and was thrilled to know that your company is thriving.
However please accept my sincere apologies for letting down the offer. I am really feeling bad to say no to such big opportunity but I am really bound to do so.
Honestly, I have recently started working with an organisation and because I was in much need of finances, I had to sign a contract with them. Hence, I am unable to be a part of your organisation. I would have never let you down, had it not been a compulsion. I hope you will understand.
I look forward to hearing from you,
Your friend,
Neha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ompulsion. I hope you will understand. I look forward to hearing from you, Your...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, honestly, however, if, look, really, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52173913043 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74995703696 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1753961554 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267555041729 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766575270005 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055839954124 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109300217784 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667850813482 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.