Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbours In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Essay topics:

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter

explain the reasons for the noise

apologise

describe what action you will take

Dear Mr Smith,

I am Ashok, your neighbour from flat no 414. Please accept my sincere apologies for the disturbance caused to you by my tenants. Please be assured that it would be my endeavour to make sure that such things do not happen again in near future.

I let out my flat on rent to university students last week only. The students appeared to be decent and sincere but since I got a complain from your side, I wanted to hear their side of the story as well. According to them, one of their projects got financial approval recently and it was a big moment for celebration. Although they started celebrating cautiously but some of their friends, who came from outside, could not contain their excitement and got carried away causing a disturbance in the neighbourhood with high noise. Since I could also relate with their celebration causing the noise, I gently requested them to celebrate outside the home from next time which they promptly accepted to vowed to never repeat the mistake again.

Please feel free to write to me if you face such an issue again.

Thank You

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...o be decent and sincere but since I got a complain from your side, I wanted to hear their ...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70157068063 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51185615484 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670157068063 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6525749665 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7777777778 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14881468624 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671772693161 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630123672031 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952210294448 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330151779126 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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