07 11 2017 A family member is coming to stay with you He she will be arriving by train in the morning but you won t be home until the evening Write a letter to your relative In your letter explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and

Dear sam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am sorry that I will not be able to pick you from the station, as I have got an urgent work at office which I need to complete before the noon of your arrival. Which would enable me to take a day off the next day, this will enable me to spend some time with you.

The keys will be placed in a secured cabin outside the house, which is visible on the right hand side of the door handle. I have set the password to your birth year 1983, so that you can recollect easily. Once you have it, pull the door towards you and rotate it twice anti-clock to open the lock.

By the way, it is very easy to reach out to my house as it is next to the Queens bus stop. Once you get off the train, find the way post to exit, after you exit, there is a bus stop straight in front of station. You can catch bus no 7, which runs with a frequency of 2 minutes ensure to get down in the second stop. My house is behind the bus stop coloured green and numbered 17, that is the only house in green in the street.

As you get in, Try to refresh yourself, the breakfast would be placed on the table, please preheat if you wish so. I have pre-ordered your lunch it should reach by 1 PM and you don't have to pay for it. I should be back home by 3 PM. We will roam around the city and have a candle light dinner to night by the sea.

If you find difficulty in finding something and during your transit to home, ring me on my mobile. Hope you understand the situation.

Best Regards
Antony

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wards you and rotate it twice anti-clock to open the lock. By the way, it is ...
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Line 8, column 178, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...r lunch it should reach by 1 PM and you dont have to pay for it. I should be back ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, well, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 307.0 206.0 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.97394136808 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95275175016 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9788480729 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7647058824 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88235294118 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338446477748 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106262939898 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627194136407 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194251604847 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655085726085 0.0580467560999 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.45 8.71597938144 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.23 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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