Dear sir,
Hello. I have a request to your hotel. I have been there and I hope you to remember that I conference your hotel few days ago.
My name is Paul and room no. is 7. The date is start 12/02/14 to 17/02/14. Actually, I lost my report for presentation. That is total 280 paper. It was specially requested to Japan university for 1 month. I'll using the report when I get a level of doctor.
I have no enough time for collected report again. Because the presentation will be opened after 4 days. I really want finding the report, and I believe you already have it when you before reading this mail.
Protect the lost goods is due the hotels.
And finally it's a law.
When you finished reading it, then just call me or leave your message to my assistant. I have a plan that when I finished the presentation, I'll be go there again for celebrate party with my friends.
Generally,
Amit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on will be opened after 4 days. I really want finding the report, and I believe y...
^^
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...goods is due the hotels. And finally its a law. When you finished reading it,...
^^^
Line 13, column 141, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... that when I finished the presentation, Ill be go there again for celebrate party w...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, really, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 26.3917525773 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48192771084 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50654535821 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644578313253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.73073606 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 46.5 76.5299724578 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.375 16.8248392259 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150766973752 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376134863907 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639580568245 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682702423599 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678926197597 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.22 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 8.62886597938 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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