2 weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well known chain of shops It did not work properly The shop took it back and said they would repair it You have waited a week and still it is not ready

Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Peter James, I bought a radio from your local branch two weeks ago and it was not working properly. I made a return to the shop I bought the radio from, and I was told it will be repair and ready for pick up after some days.
Sir, is more than a week since I drop the radio for repair without any news of it been repair or when I will be coming back to pick up my radio is there any possibility that I can pick it up at the end of this week because am really missing out on local and international news including sport.
If it cannot be repair can it be exchange for any other radio with same price in view.
Please Sir can you use your good office to see that my radio is fix or exchange as soon as possible. I will be glad if my request is giving due consideration.
Kind Regards
Peter James.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 664.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18859658245 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.5284572352 44.8134815571 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210450467529 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892741978541 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830214787519 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124661707651 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864522004617 0.0580467560999 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.22 8.71597938144 71% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.2 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 41.2886597938 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.