Dear sir/ madam,
I am writing to complain about lake of consideration of your company.
On the June 26th, I had a flight with your airline. The flight number was 2345 from Paris to London. After landing, I found that my suitcase was lost. I warned your staff about this matter. Today is 5th of July and I have not received anything yet.
My suitcase was brown leathery and rectangle shape. I have some of my university documents plus personal items in it.
Since your company is responsible about passengers suitcase I hope that you find mine and give me a massage by email.
I await your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Minoo Zafaryan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 546.0 937.175257732 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 113.0 206.0 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83185840708 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2603904387 3.78020617076 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54974780662 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 127.690721649 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.725663716814 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 165.6 290.88556701 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6643584655 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.6363636364 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.2727272727 16.8248392259 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.181818181818 4.34317383033 4% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264605846981 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087811750751 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316456903668 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124905243293 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340774708241 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.25 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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