28.09.2017New neighbours have recently moved into the house/flat next door to where you live. You have examinations soon, but your neighbours play music late at night which is affecting your studies and sleep.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your let

I am your neighbor staying next door to you. I am writing you to complaint about the unavoidable situation. Unfortunately, I could not introduce myself as I have an early morning office usually comes late in the evening.

This is in regards to the loud music sound which comes out everyday from your room late at night.
As I am graduating student from IIT and I have exam scheduled in the coming week. Due to loud sound at night I could not able to concentrate on my studies and sleep as well. Insufficient sleep at night could not able to give my proper attention at work also. I have only leisure time at night for the study, which is why this time is very crucial for me.

I would appreciate if you could understand the importance of my exam and support on this. I hope being a good civilian you will obey the decorum of the society and maintain the good relation

Yours Faithfully
Rak

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... comes late in the evening. This is in regards to the loud music sound which comes out ev...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...to the loud music sound which comes out everyday from your room late at night. As I am...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ble to give my proper attention at work also. I have only leisure time at night for ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 91, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ortance of my exam and support on this. I hope being a good civilian you will obe...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46666666667 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53753457639 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.8220072404 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.7 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267721321206 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103732841416 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070303665592 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145721390882 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579138638396 0.0580467560999 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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