29.10.2017
You have lost your credit card.
Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter
explain how you lost the card
ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement
Dear Sir or Madame,
I am writing to inform you that I have lost my credit card.
To begin with, I assume I should describe the circumstances that led to the loss. My family was having a vacation abroad. The holiday was an ideal one and everything went as I planned. Our departure was scheduled on 29th Mach 2017. We paid our bills by the plastic card and then we were delivered to the small local airport. All of a sudden I realize I forgot the card on a receptionist’s desk. I made a phone call to the hotel and a member of staff agreed to send the card to me by DHL express service. So, when my spouse and I arrived home, a delivery person was waiting for us with an envelope in his hands. I paid the bill and took the package. However, when I opened it, I figure out the sent plastic visa belongs to another person.
Consequently, I lost any hope to return my property and decide to contact you to cancel the card because I am afraid it can be used by criminals to steal my savings. In addition, I would like to say it is a pleasure to be a clientele of your financial institution because your Visa card has been accepted by all restaurants, hotels and department stores I have every visited overseas. So, may you issue for me a novel card?
I am waiting for your prompt response.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
1. it is too long for 'explain how you lost the card'. the examiners may not like a long story.
2. it is too short for 'ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement'
3. this is an extra content:
In addition, I would like to say it is a pleasure to be a clientele of your financial institution because your Visa card has been accepted by all restaurants, hotels and department stores I have every visited overseas.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 250 250
No. of Characters: 1039 1200
No. of Different Words: 156 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.976 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.156 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.491 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 71 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.597 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.389 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.321 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.595 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 699, Rule ID: SCENT_SENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'scent'?
Suggestion: scent
...ver, when I opened it, I figure out the sent plastic visa belongs to another person....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, may, so, then, in addition, i am afraid, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.388 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67793651904 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9291180561 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5625 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246558944265 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682264323439 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801775550208 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181312620034 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111227931709 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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