After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
• Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
• Express your appreciation
• And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
Dear Shelly,
I am Balaprasanth the guy whom you took care for a week after a major accident on July 2019. I am writing this letter to thank you heart fully for being there with me during the toughest days of my life despite not knowing me before.
I am quite moved by the generosity you showed during my recovery, I don’t know how one could be so helpful to a stranger they have never met before. I am very thankful to you for being there in the hospital and taking good care of me with even knowing me. I am indebted to you for all my life.
Nothing will ever be enough to repay the kindness you showed , but as a token of love I would like to invite you and your family to spend your summer holidays with me in Bangalore. Please don’t give any excuse as your children will be on leave. Expecting your response and more importantly your presence here. Awaiting your response.
Your Friend,
Bala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Shelly, I am Balaprasanth the guy whom you took ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...fe despite not knowing me before. I am quite moved by the generosity you sh...
^
Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... a stranger they have never met before. I am very thankful to you for being there...
^
Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g good care of me with even knowing me. I am indebted to you for all my life. ...
^
Line 11, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... enough to repay the kindness you showed , but as a token of love I would like to...
^^
Line 11, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ness you showed , but as a token of love I would like to invite you and your fami...
^^
Line 15, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aiting your response. Your Friend, Bala
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46470588235 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34524068989 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5611799721 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338410232221 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13646643861 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419529712965 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220175473501 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299042334931 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.