After high school, a choice that many students have to make is whether to go to college and university or not. The decision that will give people the better opportunity to have a more successful life is to go to college and university. In most people's opinions, obtaining a university degree is the best way to get success in life.
My high school teacher has said “Going to university is not the only way to success, but the shortest one”. In fact, going to the university or not is actually a challenging decision for each of us. While some people choose to work instead of continuing studying, I still choose to go to university since it is not only my dream, but also brings me more opportunities in life.
Firstly, going to university helps us widen knowledge for our future career. There is no denying that knowledge in high schools is helpful for us, however, most of this knowledge is general that every one of us must have. Therefore, if we want to have more specific and professional knowledge for our future jobs, we absolutely need to attend to college and university. Furthermore, when attending university, we have more chances to meet and work with experts in many fields.
Secondly, going to university provides us more future career opportunities. In fact, unemployment is always one of the most serious problems that our society must face to. Consequently, only when we had professional knowledge did we have chances to have better jobs. Besides, university environment is the prominent place for us to meet and work with the experts in our specific fields.
Finally, having a university degree is a helpful advantage for us. Although most companies tend to hire ones who have experience, I still believe that having degrees grows more confident when applying jobs. Since we must have made enormous efforts to obtain, the degrees are the achievements for our trying process, and actually are the main standard for choosing by the employers.
In conclusion, widening professional knowledge, providing better job opportunities and having a degree as an advantage are some reasons, which I do believe going to university is the best choice for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 937.175257732 165% => OK
No of words: 305.0 206.0 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05901639344 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90166712963 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518032786885 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 290.88556701 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9132392405 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.866666667 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9333333333 4.34317383033 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311529277107 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116924561641 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520549451346 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188480514156 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516568027825 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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