age discrimination
The significance of addressing age discrimination at work place was critically analyzed is now contentious. Age discriminatin effects have created a large dispute over the impending baring of such a development. Over the recent period much research has mentioned on this subject matter. I am inclined to belive that age discrimination at work place should make illigal. This essay will discuss some points before providing a logical conclusion.
In its very inception, there seem to be several factors why age discrimination is illigal, due to the negative mental effects on aged people. Companies think younger people are more productive and they tries to replace the older employees with younger people this leads to job insecurity and fincial problems to the older people. At the older age it will be difficult to get new job. This leads to mental pressure and related health issues in older people. The survery conducted by the the University of Sydeny reveled that every year 30% aged people loseing their jobs due to the age discrimination at work place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'try'
Suggestion: try
...ger people are more productive and they tries to replace the older employees with you...
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Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... older people. The survery conducted by the the University of Sydeny reveled that every...
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Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... older people. The survery conducted by the the University of Sydeny reveled that every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16184971098 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91021949805 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647398843931 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2019417018 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387695482332 0.216113520407 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160608761655 0.0766984524023 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151868194434 0.0603063233224 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311152388618 0.12726935374 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.000520989625229 0.0580467560999 1% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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