The air pollution

Essay topics

From my point of view,air pollution is one of the most important pollution that humans need to understand and prevent.It has been destroying the air environment by many ways.First of all,air pollution takes place due to the incomplete burning of fossil fuels. These include coal, oil, and gasoline to produce energy for electricity or transportation.The release of CO at a high level indicates how much fossil fuel is burned. This also emits other toxic pollutants like nitrogen oxides into the air lead to global warming which may cause ice melt to cause flooding in many places.Furthermore,many factories discharge an increasing amount of waste into the environment, causing the garbage collection areas to not be able to handle them, making them smelly.Least of all,all the reasons that I mentioned are due to human consciousness.Consequently, we must have solutions to reduce this issue.We should use renewable resources such as wind,water,solar... instead of coal,oil.In further ways,we can spread the 3Rs campaign to people all over the world.In summary,our environments has been being polluted seriously;therefore,it is advisable we should do all of the activites as we can to have good air quality.

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Average: 5.8 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, may, so, therefore, as to, in summary, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42021276596 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8604673895 2.54303337028 152% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.734042553191 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 16.3608247423 287% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.267096886 44.8134815571 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 254.75 76.5299724578 333% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.0 16.8248392259 279% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 4.34317383033 576% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326591518828 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19366284168 0.0766984524023 252% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190746433238 0.0603063233224 316% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326591518828 0.12726935374 257% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 8.37731958763 329% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.31 70.7449484536 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 7.45979381443 306% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 8.71597938144 173% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 7.59969072165 142% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 8.54432989691 243% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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