Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really.interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.Write a letter to the

Dear Sir,

Your advertisement on the newspaper about a course on Computer Graphics and Design sparked my interest. I am writing to inform you that I am extremely keen on enrolling myself for the same.

However, I noticed that in order to pursue the course, one must have a basic certification in the same field. Although, I do not possess a degree or a diploma in Computer but due to my passion I do have a solid foundation in Graphics and Design. I have undertaken video tutorials and practice tests via online forums to equip me for the same. I have honed my skills through regular assignments and worked as an amateur to aid companies’ down-town resetting their web page design.

It would certainly add a feather to my cap if I qualify for this course. I would humbly request you to let me enroll for the same. I am willing to participate in a pre-test, if need be. Your assistance on the matter is greatly appreciated.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours Faithfully,

xxx

Votes
Average: 9.4 (3 votes)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75428571429 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96820704487 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634285714286 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0677870035 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3333333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251077266782 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786522532399 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536299696398 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150844720909 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374122517654 0.0580467560999 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.