Dear Sir/Madam
My name is smita. I am writing this letter to express my interest for the computer course in your college. I am working as an accountant in xyz company. I came to know about this course While surfing on the internet. I am keenly interested in doing this but there is one problem that I do not have elementary certificate of this.
Here, I would like to explain the reason. I am an accountant so I do not get time to do elementary course but I know the basics of computers properly even I do most of accounting and office presentations on computer software but I feel my presentations are quite simple in front of client. To improve my productivity I would like to do this course so that I can learn the advance features of presentations.
I just want to request that please consider my application for this course under exception. If you want me to give test of elementary course then I will be ready to give exam. I also have my presentations and projects to show. Please choose whichever way is more convenient to you.
Looking for a positive reply.
Yours faithfully
Smita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s course While surfing on the internet. I am keenly interested in doing this but ...
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...ing this but there is one problem that I do not have elementary certificate of t...
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...this but there is one problem that I do not have elementary certificate of this....
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... reason. I am an accountant so I do not get time to do elementary course but I k...
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...rs properly even I do most of accounting and office presentations on computer so...
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... of accounting and office presentations on computer software but I feel my pres...
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... presentations on computer software but I feel my presentations are quite simple...
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...cation for this course under exception. If you want me to give test of elementary ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62121212121 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88979377648 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2567456273 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3571428571 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194049917166 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610438432608 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491111477687 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108858832423 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697370123005 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.