The bar graph illustrates how much money was paid for 5 main essential elements for life in 4 nations in 2009.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately clear that the amount of money spending on Food, Housing, and Transportation had almost the largest market share. By contrast, remainders( Health care, Clothing) contributed tidy consumptions in the total spending.
The years 2009, the cost Housing occupied for the largest portions in Us, Uk, and Canada at nearly 26%, 20%, and 24% respectively, with an exception in Japan. In particular, the top rate of money was spent on Food at about 23%, though this figure for Housing was extremely closer with 22%. The US and Canada populations had a significant similar in Food’s consumption at approximately 15%, while the Japanese spent on Transport a half as high as two former countries with 10%.
The cost for Clothing had a balance in its percentages in both nations, making up roughly 5%. Beside that, in term of Health care, The US civil gained the greatest deal of public attention in four locations, the proportion of money was threefold than that of Uk, reaching 7%. In addition, this concern in Japan was as well as in Canada at 5%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, well, while, in addition, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83902439024 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79790862662 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 8.0 0.824742268041 970% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.2955133366 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.222222222 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110316102476 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489576373665 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460090948752 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716739552169 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042597796243 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.